NaPoWriMo Day 10 Poem: Hail the Sea

Prompt for Day 10 by Maureen:

Today’s daily prompt (optional, as always) again comes from our archives. I’m playing to my own strengths here, but I challenge you to write a sea shanty (or shantey, or chanty, or chantey — there’s a good deal of disagreement regarding the spelling!) Anyway, these are poems in the forms of songs, strongly rhymed and rhythmic, that sailors might sing while hauling on ropes and performing other sea-going labors. Probably the two most famous sea shanties (at least before TikTok gave us The Wellerman) are What Shall We Do With A Drunken Sailor? and Blow the Man Down. And what should your poem be about? Well, I suppose it could be about anything, although some nautical phrases tossed into the chorus would be good for keeping the sea in your shanty. Haul away, boys, haul away!

 

Here’s my poem from POV of Sailors:

 

Poem: Hail the Sea

 

Off we go to a faraway land

Into the water, from the land of sand

Vast expanse of water, is all we see

Hail the sea! Hail the sea!

 

 

The Sun must rise, the Moon must wane

For us to know, we’re still in the game

No sign of life, just water that we see

Hail the sea! Hail the sea!

 

 

We dive into the blue, riding the waves

Manoeuvring its curves as it threatens to enslave

Exploring the abyss, admiring caves and coral reef

Hail the sea! Hail the sea!

 

 

Harbouring the sailors, the mariners and marine

The mighty ocean is tempestuous yet serene

Treasuring souvenirs of love, revenge, flee

Hail the sea! Hail the sea!

 

 

Off we go to a faraway land

To live our days as sea commands

Sea – the only repertoire of our glee

Hail the sea! Hail the sea!

 

©Vandana Bhasin

10.04.2023

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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