Twittering Tales # 53

by | Oct 10, 2017 | Short Stories | 10 comments

Kat Myrman  is hosting the Twittering Tales Challenge where she provides us a photo prompt. The challenge is to tell a story based on that prompt in 140 characters or less. Below is the picture for this week and my take on it :

 

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The eerie sound in the woods ran shivers.

“Someone’s stalking us!”

“I wish we’d heeded to mom’s advice,”

“Our tree house!” rejoiced my sis.

(137 characters)

10 Comments

  1. boundlessblessingsblog

    Wow apt and deep lines penned with this picture. The picture looks just the way you wrote your poem. Great.

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    • Feelings and Freedom

      Thanks Kamal! The tree house picture was the prompt. The other picture I fitted in as per my story 🙂 Thanks for appreciating.

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  2. jacquelineobyikocha

    Excellent. You told a whole story in few words and its quite apt to the image.

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    • Feelings and Freedom

      Certainly! Mom’s words are always precious. Thanks for reading and commenting!

      Reply
  3. Akhila

    Vandana… a lot many thoughts ran into my head.. were the girls safe…who was the intruder…how always moms visions come true…

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