Triolet- Nature

by | Jan 22, 2018 | Poetry | 14 comments

My poem today follows the prompt given by Elsie of Ramblingsofawriter for her Weekly Poetry Challenge#80. The prompt words are “nature” and “peace”. She has also suggested a few other poetry forms. I have tried a new form today, called Triolet Poetry. Triolet  Poetry is a poem of fixed rhythmical form, with repeated lines. It is made up of eight lines with a set rhyming scheme as shown below:

Triolet_Pattern

Here’s my take:

 

How wondrous are the ways of nature

Its silent beauty an element of admiration

Beholding in awe even its Creator

How wondrous are the ways of nature

Its serenity mesmerizes every spectator

Instilling peace and illumination

How wondrous are the ways of nature

Its silent beauty an element of admiration


 

 

14 Comments

  1. radhikasreflection

    Well done Vandana. The nature and it’s beauty are truly wonderous!!

    Reply
    • Feelings and Freedom

      Thanks dear Radhika! I am glad you liked it. Nature is quite dear to all of us, isn’t it? Have a great day!

      Reply
  2. pamkirst2014

    It has been a nature-themed weekend, so finding your beautiful verse this morning seemed very right and apt!

    Reply
    • Feelings and Freedom

      Aww, I am so glad you felt that Pam. I am really happy to hear from you after such a long time. Hope you are doing great. Thanks fro your lovely words!

      Reply
  3. kiwinana

    Beautiful verse and image capture true beauty.
    So happy you tried a new form, you brought tho prompt to life thanks.
    All the best for a wonderful week.

    Reply
    • Feelings and Freedom

      Thanks a ton Elsie for your wonderful words of appreciation. I enjoyed trying the new form. Thanks for suggesting and explaining the same. You too have a great week ahead!

      Reply
  4. Jerry Peri

    This is so very beautiful!
    Aren’t you also a person of admiration?
    Awesome imagery!

    Reply
    • Feelings and Freedom

      Thank you so much for your kind words. I really appreciate. Thanks for taking time to read my posts. Have a good day!

      Reply
  5. Smitha V

    Learnt a new form through you Vandana. And you’ve weaved the words beautifully.

    Reply
    • Feelings and Freedom

      I learnt it myself just now 🙂 I enjoyed writing it. Thanks for your kind words dear. Have a great week!

      Reply

Submit a Comment

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *