Tanka: Supremacy

by Feelings and Freedom | May 15, 2017 | Poetry | 9 comments

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sharp rays of the sun

illuminate each planet

hallucinating

planets for billions of years

what a clear supremacy

The tanka incorporates prompt words “clear” (synonym of “clean”) and “sharp” of Colleen’s Weekly Poetry Challenge # 33

9 Comments

boundlessblessingsblog on May 15, 2017 at 9:58 am

Great tanka words. Nice.
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Anjana on May 15, 2017 at 2:58 pm

Great !
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- Feelings and Freedom on May 16, 2017 at 1:56 am
  
  Thanks Anjana!
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Colleen Chesebro on May 15, 2017 at 3:12 pm

Nice use of the prompt words. Well done! <3
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- Feelings and Freedom on May 16, 2017 at 1:56 am
  
  Thanks Colleen!
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Akhila on May 16, 2017 at 5:28 am

Ah.. those rays are fallen in your words vandana
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- Feelings and Freedom on May 16, 2017 at 12:10 pm
  
  Thanks for your lovely words Akhila 🙂
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mitadaur on May 16, 2017 at 6:27 am

Lovely poem.
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- Feelings and Freedom on May 16, 2017 at 12:11 pm
  
  Thanks Raja 🙂
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