Tanka: Old Vs. New

by Feelings and Freedom | Apr 11, 2017 | Poetry | 15 comments

Tanka_Old Vs. New

old generation

ardently welcomes new breed

accedes hopefully

a new perspective of life

only to be ostracized

Inspired by the prompt “Old and New” of Weekly Tanka Challenge #39.

This is also my submission towards Day 11 of NaPoWriMo.

15 Comments

Sheetal Bhardwaj on April 11, 2017 at 9:00 am

Harsh reality of this generation. Nicely put through. 🙂
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- Feelings and Freedom on April 11, 2017 at 10:25 am
  
  Yes…harsh but reality…I wish this difference could somehow be reduced..Thanks for your comment.
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  - Sheetal Bhardwaj on April 11, 2017 at 12:49 pm
    
    True that. You are welcome. 🙂
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yassy on April 11, 2017 at 9:30 am

So much said in do few lines. Very evocative ,Vandana.
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- Feelings and Freedom on April 11, 2017 at 10:25 am
  
  Thanks Yassy
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daneelyunus on April 11, 2017 at 9:33 am

nice one
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- Feelings and Freedom on April 11, 2017 at 10:26 am
  
  Thanks
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  - daneelyunus on April 11, 2017 at 10:31 am
    
    Welcome mam
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Sangbad on April 11, 2017 at 9:51 am

Off prompt…nice one…
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- Feelings and Freedom on April 11, 2017 at 10:27 am
  
  Yup..A little tied up today 😉 Thanks
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boundlessblessingsblog on April 11, 2017 at 1:24 pm

Reality of life and so well written
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- Feelings and Freedom on April 11, 2017 at 5:48 pm
  
  Thanks Kamal
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  - boundlessblessingsblog on April 12, 2017 at 4:37 am
    
    Welcome
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kiwinana on April 11, 2017 at 8:57 pm

Nice tanka, thanks for joining in on the fun, I have added your tanka post to this week’s prompt “season 7 easter”. Have a nice day.
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- Feelings and Freedom on April 12, 2017 at 2:29 am
  
  Thanks 🙂 I enjoyed writing for that prompt.
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