Tanka: Light or Darkness

by Feelings and Freedom | Mar 31, 2017 | Poetry | 8 comments

Tanka_Light or darkness

Benevolent God

blessed me again a day

to wake up to light

Do I still lament darkness

am I grateful today

This Tanka is in response to Colleen’s Weekly Poetry Challenge #27 which mandates using words “Light” and “Dark”.

8 Comments

Sangbad on March 31, 2017 at 10:53 am

wonderful…liked it a lot…
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- Feelings and Freedom on March 31, 2017 at 10:53 am
  
  Thanks dear 🙂
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Colleen Chesebro on March 31, 2017 at 2:58 pm

Welcome! I’m glad you found your way here. Good to see you. A beautiful Tanka poem with a splendid message. Well done. <3
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- Feelings and Freedom on March 31, 2017 at 3:44 pm
  
  Thanks Colleen!
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micketalbot on March 31, 2017 at 5:08 pm

I agree with Colleen! Keep an open for a pingback.
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MakeItUltra™ on April 1, 2017 at 6:05 am

Beautiful !
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- Feelings and Freedom on April 1, 2017 at 8:14 am
  
  Thanks 🙂
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