Tanka: Christmas

by Feelings and Freedom | Dec 21, 2017 | Poetry | 10 comments

hearts gleaming with joy

mind rejoicing vacations

cakes, gifts and goodies

Aha, Christmas time is here

I hope Santa heard my prayers!

Linked to Weekly Tanka Challenge #76 hosted by Elsie of Ramblingsofawriter where keeping in view the spirit of Christmas, she has asked us to use prompt words “Christmas” and “Joy” in our Tanka this time.

10 Comments

Sudhir Chauhan on December 21, 2017 at 6:22 am

beautiful lines…….
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- Feelings and Freedom on December 22, 2017 at 7:30 am
  
  Thanks Sudhir!
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boundlessblessingsblog on December 21, 2017 at 9:27 am

Hahaha so cute Vandana and he has surely heard these beautiful lines and such a cute Santa with little dainty specs which is suiting him so well. Great poem
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- Feelings and Freedom on December 22, 2017 at 7:30 am
  
  Thanks Kamal. The Santa in the pic is indeed so cute 🙂
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  - boundlessblessingsblog on December 22, 2017 at 8:27 am
    
    Welcome Vandana and yes a little darling.
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kiwinana on December 21, 2017 at 7:34 pm

Yes, perfect words for a Christmas Tanka poem, they ring the message loud and clear.
Thanks. Wishing you a Merry Christmas and a happy holiday with lots of laughter and fun.
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- Feelings and Freedom on December 22, 2017 at 7:29 am
  
  Thanks dear Elsie! Merry Christmas to you and your family too!
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Ξnigma on December 23, 2017 at 4:05 pm

Beautifully written. 🙂
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- Feelings and Freedom on December 23, 2017 at 5:02 pm
  
  Thank you so much. Have a great weekend!
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  - Ξnigma on December 23, 2017 at 5:18 pm
    
    You’re welcome. 😀
    Thank you. You too have a great weekend. 🙂
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