Quadrille: I am grateful for…

by | Aug 29, 2017 | Poetry | 12 comments

 

 

a long list of grievances

forever leads our way

do we care to assimilate

a list exhibiting “I am grateful for…”

it’s certain to surpass the lead

if we feel the bliss

of another sunny day

of smiles and blessings

that illuminate our day!

 

 

This post is linked to dVerse Quadrille#39 being hosted by Bjorn Rudberg who has challenged us to write a quadrille with the word “bliss”.

 

12 Comments

  1. Frank Hubeny

    Reminding oneself of what we should be grateful for seems to me to be a fast path to bliss. Nice poem.

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  2. Sumana Roy

    Yes, gratitude definitely leads to bliss. “a list exhibiting “I am grateful for…”…NIce fulcrum point of this wonderful poem.

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  3. Victoria C. Slotto

    This is so wise. Each night, I like to list those things that gave me gratitude throughout the day. They are a side-effects free antidepressant. Thanks for the reminder.

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    • Feelings and Freedom

      Thanks Victoria. It’s such a wonderful habit to list your blessings. I love the idea of side effects free anti depressants 🙂

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  4. revivedwriter

    I like this poem and the sentiment of looking for things to be grateful for. I do it every day. 🙂

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    • Feelings and Freedom

      Thanks. Gratitude is the essence of hope. It’s great you practice it everyday. Have a good day!

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  5. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    I love an attitude when you find the bliss where you are… we need to be better at that.

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    • Feelings and Freedom

      Indeed. We often forget to count our blessings in the midst of the challenges posed by life. Thanks for your views. Have a great weekend!

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