Poem: I wish there were a world

by | Aug 22, 2017 | Poetry | 16 comments






I wish there were a world

where I wasn’t a prisoner of time



I wish I could hook the ocean

whose waves bid to force me drown




I wish I could cage the moments

and held them hostage of mine




I wish I could silence the sounds

that birth and thrust all wounds



I wish I could bottle up the air

that strew my woes around




I wish I could douse the fire

that burnt my strength down




I wish I could eclipse the sun

and feel the power rebound




I wish I could freeze the time

so happiness wouldn’t be a crime!

 

16 Comments

  1. yassy
    yassy on August 22, 2017 at 2:01 pm

    I so wish that too.

    Reply
  3. Smitha V
    Smitha V on August 22, 2017 at 2:52 pm

    I wish so too Vandana.. especially para 4 to 8. The picture and the words perfectly match. Lovely!

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    • Feelings and Freedom
      Feelings and Freedom on August 22, 2017 at 2:57 pm

      Thanks Smitha! I am sure many of us feel that way and I hope all our wishes are granted too !

      Reply
  5. mishradivya
    mishradivya on August 28, 2017 at 4:30 pm

    I wish stolen your writing talents……. In which I failll …..

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    • Feelings and Freedom
      Feelings and Freedom on August 29, 2017 at 6:24 am

      Awww! That’s such a wonderful compliment. Thank you so much for your lovely words. I love your writings too 🙂

      Reply
  6. @gauravskaintura98
    @gauravskaintura98 on September 7, 2017 at 3:18 pm

    How beautiful these things are………..But only in our wishlist.

    Reply
  7. vandana
    vandana on September 19, 2017 at 9:18 am

    An enchanting place,I too would like to go there

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    • Feelings and Freedom
      Feelings and Freedom on September 19, 2017 at 12:15 pm

      I wish there were such a place where we could live our lives even momentarily. Thanks for your kind words 🙂

      Reply

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