Poem: A Woman’s Shoes

by | Sep 1, 2017 | Poetry | 23 comments

A closet flooded with shoes

an obsession a woman ensues

red, white, golden and blue

black and pink in all its hue

 

adding a tad of perfection

a silhouette for each occasion

beach flip flops

to winter shoes

leather, rubber

or PU shoes

 

from ankle straps

to ballet flats

from sandals and mules

to sneakers and cools

all lined up

waiting to be picked up

still she wants stilettos

as they far differ from

wedges and peep toes

 

cinderella shoes

 

and don’t miss out her glass shoes

for a special occasion she will choose

to feel like Cinderella

who’s about to grace Prince’s villa

 

her taste of shoe selection

reveals her persona reflection

she isn’t dressed to precision

if her shoes don’t mark an impression!

 

This post is linked to dVerse Poetics where Kim wants us to write about shoes. What an interesting prompt! I’m sure all women here will agree to my version here 🙂 Do share your views.

 

23 Comments

  1. yassy

    Nice one

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      • yassy

        Welcome, Vandana! Have a wonderful weekend.

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  2. Reena Saxena

    Superb piece! I confess to this obsession with handbags and shoes 🙂

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    • Feelings and Freedom

      Thanks Reena. Same here. When I was writing this, I felt like writing one for bags too 🙂

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  3. kim881

    Even though I wear comfortable shoes, I think women’s shoes are works of art. I once made a lamp out of a discarded red patent leather high-heel platform shoe – I felt sorry for it because it had lost its partner. Your list of the flood of shoes is comprehensive. I particularly like the phrase: ‘a silhouette for each occasion’ and the rhymes in the lines:
    ‘from ankle straps
    to ballet flats
    from sandals and mules
    to sneakers and cools
    all lined up
    waiting to be picked up’.

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    • Feelings and Freedom

      Thanks Kim. The prompt was pretty interesting. Women’s shoes and bags are indeed a work of art and creativity. I am moved by your words that you felt sorry as it had lost its partner! Thanks for your lovely words.

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  4. Feelings and Freedom

    I’m sure…footwear is one of the things we keep are eyes open for 🙂 Thanks Radhika.

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  5. Feelings and Freedom

    Oh yes! That’s another favorite accessory of all women. My husband keeps pulling me in front of a handbag store 😉

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  6. Frank Hubeny

    Nice description of shoes to fill a closet. Wouldn’t a glass shoe make someone look barefoot? Of course if it sparkles in the light that might be interesting.

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    • Feelings and Freedom

      A glass shoe would certainly be transparent but wouldn’t make the person appear barefoot. It certainly shall be a charming accessory to have. I don’t have one but would be keen on buying it 😉 Thanks for your wonderful comment Frank.

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  7. Rashmi Talwar

    Wonderful lines..

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  8. Feelings and Freedom

    Absolutely! Shoes and bag complete and compliment a woman’s grace! Thanks Smitha.

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