Limerick Challenge Week 15: Dark

by Vandana Bhasin | Apr 14, 2016 | Poetry | 10 comments

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This post is in response to the Limerick Challenge Week 15 hosted by @mindandlifematters.

Another failure saddened her, tore her apart,

But she was the owner of a brave heart,

She knew it was dark,

There was no spark,

Yet she held her head high to make a restart!

10 Comments

jacquelineobyikocha on April 14, 2016 at 12:41 pm

That’s the best way forward. Holding up her head and walking tall.
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- Feelings and Freedom on April 14, 2016 at 12:48 pm
  
  True Jacqueline ! Thanks for your comment 🙂
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  - jacquelineobyikocha on April 14, 2016 at 1:22 pm
    
    My pleasure 🙂
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pranabaxom on April 14, 2016 at 7:03 pm

“Yet she held her head high to make a restart!” – Bravo!
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- Feelings and Freedom on April 15, 2016 at 3:34 am
  
  Thanks !
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maria on April 15, 2016 at 4:33 am

Beautifully written and inspiring, too. Thank you for sharing. 🙂
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- Feelings and Freedom on April 15, 2016 at 6:53 am
  
  Thanks for reading and liking it
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MindandLifeMatters on April 15, 2016 at 7:52 pm

And that’s exactly what I respect about women like her! Awesome limerick!
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- Feelings and Freedom on April 16, 2016 at 2:55 am
  
  Thanks 🙂
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