ALS NaPoWriMo Day 24 Prompt:
A human’s heart is an ocean of secrets. No matter how close relationships we have, we still have some secrets. How about sharing those secrets today? I know, a secret shared with one is no more a secret. So maybe you could write about the secret of keeping a secret. Whatever it may be, we are eagerly awaiting to know about your secrets today 🙂
I have a followed a self-created pattern in the all verses of the poem above. Hope it doesn’t already exist. If it does, please apprise me.
I’m calling this form “Pentorama” as I am planning to write more of these. Please feel free to follow the pattern for your poems with due credit 🙂
First two lines are vivid description of the subject.
Third line is negative or not-so-good traits of the subject.
Fourth line is positive traits of the subject.
Fifth line discloses the name of the subject.
Poem: Celestial Secrets (A Pentorama)
The golden orb of light that never fails to shine
The crimson bedazzles in the expanse of blue skies
Fierce, gigantic, indiscernible
Yet glistening, nourishing, revitalizing
I wonder the secret of unvanquished Sun
The glitterati that embellishes the sky as bride
Quietly extenuating the murkiness of night
Distant, massive, capricious
Yet omnipresent, iridescent, ethereal
I wonder the secret of luminescent stars
Aboding millions of galaxies, planets and stars
Creating atoms, energy, frequency in astral
Incomprehensible, enigmatic, phenomenal
Yet sacrosanct, evolving, abundant
I wonder the secret of mystical Universe
Infinite emotions emerge and elapse
A connection of mind, body, soul and universe
Insatiable, irrational, impulsive
Yet affectionate, passionate, compassionate
I wonder the secret of magnanimity of heart
©Vandana Bhasin
24.04.2023