Tanka: Time

by Feelings and Freedom | Nov 3, 2016 | Poetry | 10 comments

This post is in response to Weekly Haiku Challenge hosted by Ronovan of RonovanWrites. The prompts for this week are Creep and Race. I have written Tanka, an extended form of Haiku.

tanka_time

Watching quietly

I caught new day creeping in

Today waned to past

Future flowering today

An eternal race of time!

10 Comments

Sandeep Kanabar on November 3, 2016 at 7:43 am

Beautiful!
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- Feelings and Freedom on November 3, 2016 at 8:04 am
  
  Thanks Sandeep !
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jacquelineobyikocha on November 3, 2016 at 1:36 pm

What a calming Tanka.
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- Feelings and Freedom on November 3, 2016 at 2:10 pm
  
  Thanks my dear 🙂
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  - jacquelineobyikocha on November 4, 2016 at 3:12 pm
    
    My pleasure
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Vashti Quiroz-Vega on November 4, 2016 at 6:18 pm

Lovely Tanka!
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- Feelings and Freedom on November 5, 2016 at 1:34 am
  
  Thanks 🙂
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rosemawrites on November 8, 2016 at 8:55 am

aww. beautiful!
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- Feelings and Freedom on November 8, 2016 at 9:45 am
  
  Thanks dear 🙂
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  - rosemawrites on November 8, 2016 at 9:46 am
    
    you’re welcome!
    Reply

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