An Inspiration from Mother Nature

by | Mar 5, 2016 | Poetry | 11 comments

 

The sun was bright, but there was no light.

The sky was clear, yet my mind was gripped with fear.

The birds were flying, but my heart was crying.

The day was new, yet my hopes were few.

My heart was full, my spirits were low,

My mind was numb, it got a blow.

My life was arid, my life was slow,

There was no hope, there was no glow.

 

I gaped at flowers, I stared at trees,

I gazed at hills, I followed the seas.

I glanced at stars, I awed at moon,

I implored the nature, it blessed me soon!!

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The sun, the stars, the moon in the sky,

Never fail to shine, never quit or slide by.

The celestials guide, when you are low or high,

β€œIs it a blessing?” I asked with a sigh!

 

The blooming flowers, the magnanimous trees,

The majestic mountains, the invigorating seas,

The glory, the humility, the vibrance in these,

The beauty and bounty, do we really see?

 

The serenity, tranquility of nature is a beam;

Mesmerizing and promising, they always seem.

I learned vitality, I learned to gleam,

The zeal and credence, to live my dream!!!

 

 

 

11 Comments

  1. Wandering Soul

    Amazing! What a lovely inspiration poem. Loved the transition in the mood from a dark frame of mine to hope and life.

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  2. Samc95xc

    Friend, I’m not sure if this was your masterpiece or not, but it definitely has conquered a place in my heart. Its so vivid, that I can picture it in my mind!
    Just awesome friend!
    Much love
    Sam

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    • Feelings and Freedom

      Your comment made my day!!
      I am glad you liked it so much. Thanks for your inspiring words:)

      Reply
  3. Christina

    Such a vivid poem! I love the shift in moods.

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    • Feelings and Freedom

      Nature truly has an ability to shift our mood…was trying to focus on that. Thanks for liking.

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      • Christina

        Yes, it does. πŸ™‚ Sometimes we just need to step outside to start feeling refreshed and ready to tackle the day again.

        Reply

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