The creation through my eyes: NaPoWriMo Day 6

by | Apr 6, 2020 | NaPoWriMo 2020, Poetry | 0 comments

NaPoWriMo Day 6:

Today’s (optional) prompt is ekphrastic in nature – but rather particular! Today, I’d like to challenge you to write a poem from the point of view of one person/animal/thing from Hieronymous Bosch’s famous (and famously bizarre) triptych The Garden of Earthly Delights. Whether you take the position of a twelve-legged clam, a narwhal with a cocktail olive speared on its horn, a man using an owl as a pool toy, or a backgammon board being carried through a crowd by a fish wearing a tambourine on its head, I hope that you find the experience deliriously amusing. And if the thought of speaking in the voice of a porcupine-as-painted-by-a-man-who-never-saw-one leaves you cold, perhaps you might write from the viewpoint of Bosch himself?


 

The creation through my eyes

 

When God created Earth

Did He foresee so wide abuse and treachery?

I don’t know about you

But I’m an artist, The Hieronymus Bosch

I feel obliged to present my view

 

 

Let me call it “The Garden of Earthly Delights”

For I want to offer de tour paradise

And not just that, my dears

For all the human sins and iniquities,

To Hell will lead you, your indignities

 

 

The Creator of universe synergizes energy

In the act of unifying Adam with Eve

In the Garden of Eden, experiencing exotic beauty

To create an inimitable race

The quintessence of intelligence titled “humanity

 

 

The world begins to breed, a paradise it feels

Carousing in wondrous fantasies

Seeking carnal pleasures from egoistic plays

Arousing sensual curiosity

Playing amorous games overtly without ignominy

 

 

Now follows The Last Judgment Day

Figures of torture, frozen waterways

The Prince of Hell tormenting for Seven Deadly sins

The immoralities eliciting eternal damnation

Humans succumbing to their evil temptations

 

 

I see the humanity’s fall from grace

Retribution for omission to follow His will-

To rise above covets, liberate from yearnings

To respect ‘The Tree of Life’ for eternity

Isn’t it what Lord directed, my dear?

 

 

Ask I,

The painter of “The Garden of Earthly Delights”

 

©Vandana Bhasin

                                                                                                06.04.2020

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