You complete me!

by Feelings and Freedom | Feb 11, 2020 | Poetry | 6 comments


Tenderness of your voice,

Moistens the wryness of crisp air



Fragrance adorning your silken curves-

An aroma that enlivens my breath



Depth of your emerald eyes,

Unravels the mystery of universe



But it’s the rhythm of your heart,

That fills me up- completes me!


         ©Vandana Bhasin

Linked to dVerse where De Jackson (aka WhimsyGizmo) is hosting Monday Quadrille (a poem of exactly 44 words excluding title). De wants us to use the word ‘fill’ in the poem.

6 Comments

whimsygizmo on February 11, 2020 at 4:44 pm

Ah, yes, that steady beat. Wonderful.
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- Feelings and Freedom on February 11, 2020 at 6:03 pm
  
  Thanks De!
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Björn Rudberg (brudberg) on February 11, 2020 at 9:28 pm

There is nothing better than to live in the same beat.
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- Feelings and Freedom on February 12, 2020 at 4:14 am
  
  So true ! It’s a blessing ☺️
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Frank Hubeny on February 12, 2020 at 3:40 am

I like how the eyes unveil the universe.
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- Feelings and Freedom on February 13, 2020 at 1:54 am
  
  Eyes speak a deep language, do t they 🙂 Thanks Frank!
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