sun enlightens day glitterati of bright stars recoups verve at night led by charismatic moon nature balances life with grace an inspiration to seek
This is Bussokusekika Poetry – a pattern of 5-7-5-7-7-7. It is a Japanese form of poetry consisting of a Tanka poem with an extra phrase of seven added at the end.
Linked to Weekly poetry challenge #88 hosted by Ramblingsofawriter where Elsie has challenged us to write any form of poetry using words “balance” and “grace”.
Nature sure balances life and it is so pronounced by your beautiful words, Vandana.
Thank you so much Kamal
Welcome Vandana.
Beautiful words, nicely written Bussokusekika poem.
Thanks, hope you are having a great week.
Good job Vandana !!