Tanka: Breeze

by Feelings and Freedom | Feb 10, 2018 | Poetry | 5 comments

breeze

freshness of flowers

aroma of morning rain

adduces crispy breeze

reminiscing our fervor

I send love through flirty wind

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boundlessblessingsblog on February 10, 2018 at 12:55 pm

Brilliant composition of words, Vandana so fresh like the breeze
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- Feelings and Freedom on February 10, 2018 at 1:38 pm
  
  Thanks dear Kamal 🙂 Have a great weekend
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  - boundlessblessingsblog on February 10, 2018 at 2:11 pm
    
    Welcome dear u too
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Smitha V on February 11, 2018 at 3:40 am

I just felt the flirty wind Vandana :). Such a soft, sweet Tanka.
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- Feelings and Freedom on February 11, 2018 at 3:52 am
  
  Thanks Smitha 😉
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