Tanka: Earth

by | Jan 15, 2018 | Poetry | 4 comments

 

obscurity looms

as Earth spins on its axis

retracting from Sun

steering us from dawn to dusk

to radiate light elsewhere

 

 

Linked to Weekly Tanka Challenge#79 hosted by Elsie of Ramblingsofawriter where the challenge is to use the words “light” and “dark”. I have used “light” and “obscurity.”

 

 

4 Comments

  1. kiwinana

    I love the way you use words, very artistic, thanks for taking part in the weekly prompt, I appreciate it.
    It’s always nice seeing you, love the impression on your face, always makes me smile.
    Hope you have a pleasant week.

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    • Feelings and Freedom

      Thank you so much Elsie for your heart warming words 🙂 I love to participate. I like your prompts. Have a great week ahead.

      Reply

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