Tanka: Night Sky

by Feelings and Freedom | Dec 11, 2017 | Poetry | 11 comments

stars gift sight to eyes

night breeze gracefully dances

tickles mind and ears

to rhythm of ocean waves

moon guards as knight of night sky

The post follows the prompt words “Eyes” and “Ears” shared by Elsie of Ramblingsofawriter for her Weekly Tanka Challenge#74 and to Haiku Horizons for the prompt word “ocean” for week 197 (though it’s a tanka and not haiku!)

11 Comments

B. on December 11, 2017 at 12:07 pm

Bright and dreamy…
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- Feelings and Freedom on December 11, 2017 at 12:45 pm
  
  Thanks B 🙂
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  - B. on December 11, 2017 at 12:46 pm
    
    Thank you for posting these lovely verses !
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yassy on December 11, 2017 at 12:14 pm

Nice flow. Enjoyed this one.
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- Feelings and Freedom on December 11, 2017 at 12:46 pm
  
  Thanks dear Yassy 🙂
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  - yassy on December 11, 2017 at 1:10 pm
    
    Welcome my dear.
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kiwinana on December 11, 2017 at 7:29 pm

Sweet, I love those words, they ring true leaving a peaceful scene. Thanks.
All the best for a peaceful relaxing week.
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- Feelings and Freedom on December 12, 2017 at 3:16 am
  
  Thanks Elsie 🙂
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Infinite Living on December 11, 2017 at 10:14 pm

So beautiful!
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- Feelings and Freedom on December 12, 2017 at 3:15 am
  
  Thanks Pragalbha!
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  - Infinite Living on December 12, 2017 at 7:57 pm
    
    You are very welcome!
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