Poem: Please Don’t Judge Me!

I enjoy some tasks

But I detest others too

I can work all day

But I respite some days too

I value your concern

But please don’t judge me!

I like to be modest

But I am sloppy too

I prefer to eat healthy

But I relish junk too

I value your concern

But please don’t judge me!

I love family time

But I need “Me” time too

I adore my family

But I love myself too

I value your concern

But please don’t judge me!

I care to interact

But I respect my privacy too

I have good friends

But I cherry-pick them too

I value your concern

But please don’t judge me!

I am a rational being

But I can be poignant too

I wish to keep all happy

But I may not be able to

I value your concern

But please don’t judge me!

I seek your opinion

But I’m not myself a fool

I assess all prospects

But don’t you dare ridicule

I value your concern

But please don’t judge me!

I am resilient as wind

But pliant as water too

I need friends by my side

But I can manage unaided too

I value your concern

But please don’t judge me!

14 Comments

Vivian Zems on November 21, 2017 at 9:14 am

I wouldn’t judge you- except for the quality of this poem.
Verdict : fun and excellent!
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- Feelings and Freedom on November 21, 2017 at 9:15 am
  
  Thanks Vivian 🙂 I accept that verdict gladly 🙂
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  - Vivian Zems on November 21, 2017 at 1:50 pm
    
    🙂 🙂
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boundlessblessingsblog on November 21, 2017 at 9:48 am

So deep and poignant words so well composed, Vandana. Awesome poem.
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- Feelings and Freedom on November 21, 2017 at 11:45 am
  
  Thanks dear Kamal! I am glad you felt that way.
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  - boundlessblessingsblog on November 21, 2017 at 1:08 pm
    
    Welcome dear Vandana
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kishanlakhotia on November 21, 2017 at 9:55 am

Nicely worded
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- Feelings and Freedom on November 21, 2017 at 11:45 am
  
  Thank you sir 🙂
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  - kishanlakhotia on November 21, 2017 at 11:50 am
    
    Welcome
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haripriyakm on November 21, 2017 at 10:15 am

That sounded like you, V!
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- Feelings and Freedom on November 21, 2017 at 11:48 am
  
  Ha Ha! Thanks Hari! You know me well 😉
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Feelings and Freedom on November 21, 2017 at 11:48 am

I know. We always encounter someone who is meddling with our life..uninvited 😉 Thanks Deepika!
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viewsofpreethib on November 22, 2017 at 5:55 am

Awesome write Vandana <3
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- Feelings and Freedom on November 22, 2017 at 5:58 am
  
  Thanks Preethi!
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