Tanka: Dreams

by Feelings and Freedom | Nov 13, 2017 | Poetry | 4 comments

dreams keep us afloat

when turbulent waves of time

ally wrath of fate

questioning our true mettle

to crack mystery of life

The post follows the prompt words “mystery” and “dreams” given by Elsie for her Weekly Tanka Challenge #70.

4 Comments

kiwinana on November 13, 2017 at 7:44 pm

Beautiful image and tanka poem, thanks for writing a post, appreciated.
Wishing you a happy safe week.
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- Feelings and Freedom on November 14, 2017 at 7:20 am
  
  Thanks Elsie!
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Akhila on November 15, 2017 at 12:32 pm

Turbulent waves and dreams…liked that vandana….
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- Feelings and Freedom on November 15, 2017 at 12:46 pm
  
  Thanks dear Akhila
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