Acrostic Quadrille: Echoes

by | May 9, 2017 | Poetry | 19 comments

The prompt given by dVerse is to write a quadrille using the word “echo/ echoes/ echoing”. I wanted more fun so decided to combine two forms of poetry to write an acrostic quadrille.

An acrostic poem is a type of poetry where the first, last or other letters in a line spell out a particular word or phrase. The most common and simple form of an acrostic poem is where the first letters of each line spell out the word or phrase. In the poem below, the first letter of each line joins to spell “echoes”.

A quadrille  is a poem of exactly 44 words.

 

 

Every word that flowered from your lips

Crafted an indelible imprint on my heart

How unequivocally you pronounced our destiny that day

Oblivious of my adoration, smothering the echoes of my heart

Echoes of your words still resonate all the time

Silencing my heart

 

19 Comments

  1. whimsygizmo

    This is a great acrostic! 🙂 I love the idea of words flowering from lips…

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  2. yassy

    Wow. Wonderful A.

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  3. frankhubeny

    Words can silence a heart. One needs to take care that they don’t resonate in a harmful way. Nice description of how the heart echoes compete with the word echoes.

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    • Feelings and Freedom

      You are right Frank. Words can act like a sword or like a bandage. That’s the power of words! Thanks for your appreciative words.

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  4. sangbad

    Wow Vandana…leave the form…it is so romantic…

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  5. revivedwriter

    Beautifully written. 🙂 I like the combination of forms.

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  6. ghostmmnc

    Echoes and words seem to send out ripples having an effect on everyone. Beautiful! 🙂

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  7. Olga

    Hi Vandana. Lovely to see an acrostic flow so wonderfully echoing your poetic talent. <3

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  8. Bodhirose

    So sad when our adoration is not noticed or reciprocated but love your beautifully sensitive acrostic…so enjoyed it.
    Gayle ~

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    • Feelings and Freedom

      Finding true love is indeed a blessing. I am grateful for your kind words of appreciation. Thanks Gayle!

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